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The Sun Has Set

Mar 30, 2009, 1:36:05 PM by ~Jeot21
Literature / Poetry / General Poetry / Ballad

So now I walk this road again,
I see the setting sun.
Quite frankly, I don't give a damn,
Cause I still got this gun.
My soul lies far behind me,
Soaking wet from rain.
The end won't spoil my story,
My story ends with pain.
Pain that's so unbearable,
The strongest man will cry.
Pain that is so terrible,
One will beg to die.
I hold the gun so tightly,
It's pointed at my head.
I pull the trigger slightly,
And now the sun has set.

Believe in my final words, and keep your hopes and dreams. Reality, sometimes so cruel, is not always what it seems.

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Because it's my very best poem.

Raining Blood Instead

May 26, 2009, 2:59:12 PM by ~Jeot21
Literature / Poetry / General Poetry / Songs & Lyrics

A new dawn enlightening the land,
Is it beginning, or is it the end?
I see the clouds, the sun shining through.
And I'm so scared, don't know what to do.

Cause I feel so alive,
But the world is so dead.
I feel like I could fly,
With wings I've never had.
As blue as the sky,
But the sky is red.
It should be raining tears,
But it's raining blood instead.

The day has come, but it's dark as night.
The sun is shining but there is no light.
It's like I'm dreaming, but I'm not asleep.
This is a nightmare, but it's not a dream.

Cause I feel so alive,
But the world is so dead.
I feel like I could fly,
With wings I've never had.
As blue as the sky,
But the sky is red.
It should be raining tears,
But it's raining blood instead!

-solo-

Cause I feel so alive,
But the world is so dead.
I feel like I could fly,
With wings I've never had.
As blue as the sky,
But the sky is red.
It should be raining tears,
But it's raining blood instead.

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One of my better works, I even wrote some tabs to it

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Just Another Poem To you, this is just another poem,
Another bunch of words.
Just someone writing something down,
That indicates something hurts.
But to me, this is my last resort,
My Valhalla, this is home.
And you can't read this the way I can,
So it's just another poem.Just Another Poem by ~Jeot21

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Green be the color for me In Ireland they have coffee,
With whisky and with cream,
In Scotland they have haggis,
And in England they have tea.
We like to drink in gallons,
We got our guiness beer,
In the States they have St. Patrick's day,
But Paddy was from here!

Green be the color of Ireland,
Blue be the sight of the sea,
Red be the view of a pretty rose,
But green be the color for me!
(2x)

We had a fight with Scotland,
Our armies traveled far,
We knew that we'd be drinkin' soon,
For we would win the war.

Green be the color of Ireland,
Blue be the sight of the sea,
Red be the view of a pretty rose,
But green be the color for me!
(2x)

-solo-

GrGreen be the color for me by ~Jeot21

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Miracles Have you ever really known,
That there's no dark, without the light,
There's no good, without the evil,
And no day, without the night.
Have you ever really known,
Why the stars, they shine so bright,
Why the ocean is so deeply blue,
Why the mountains are so high.
Have you ever really known,
About the miracles of life?Miracles by ~Jeot21

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And we were smiling... Broken down
My day sucked
I took it out
On everyone

But there you were
Smiling away
This angry face
It could not stay

We smiled to each other
I took out my hand
I said 'hello'
You just smiled again

You said 'hi'
And that made me smile
So we were smiling again
And it took a while

The conversation was over
But every smile remained
My bad day was over
But a new love was gainedAnd we were smiling... by ~Ereb-Ohtar

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The Predate... You're locked up in your room.
Unsatisfied with everything you've got.
But the moment has changed
Since that woman turned your
Life opposite and hot.

You were shy to make the move.
Too damn shy to talk to her on MSN.
But you definately said yes to her
In an email; about having a predate.

It's going to be next week.
Movie or a coffee; still unsure.
Just be yourself; same as before.

She finds you funny.
Yet a delicate charmful personality.
Just don't lose yourself
Over the edge of insanity.

She finds you amazing.
You gotta stay in that tune.
Cause that predate will be
Coming very soon... The Predate... by ~talbotC

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Sees The Beauty In All I really want to know
What you're going through.
And I really want to understand.
Why do you lock yourself
Up in your room;
Watching TV
Most of the time;
And let that time go passed;
Like you even cared.

Look through your window.
There's a world outside.
I wouldn't say it's great.
And I wouldn't say it's alright.
But if you already met me;
Let me show you the positivity in the world.
I'm just one of the fewer that sees the beauty in all...

I know that life can be complicated.
And I could definately understand why you're
Locking yourself up.
I guess that others bullied You.
That made you shut down and doubt.
BuSees The Beauty In All by ~talbotC

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Bacon & Ice Cream

Journal Entry: Tue Jul 13, 2010, 5:18 PM

Weird combination huh?
Not really actually.
Tomorrow, I'm going to have an "ice cream day" along with

(Linde) and Dymion.
And since Linde = baconflame, it'll be Bacon & Ice Cream.
Ramblerambleramble.
Anyhow, we'll be buying a pack of ice cream each, party-flavored (tastes like party, yes).
And we'll be processing that during the day.

I should let you know, I'm a bit tipsy while writing this, so my intended humorous statements may sound less humorous to you.

And now to last week.
Last week was crap.
My girlfriend is on a trip to Norway for 2 weeks and I should feel like crap. I do, I really, really do. Fucking Norway with your fjords and your Norwegian people.

And so, we lost the finals of the world cup.
Did I mention that I, and few are with me, don't give a rat's ass?
I don't.
And so, the world-wide broadcasting of this country's humiliation made my day.

And now let me tell you a great story.

"The Origin of my Influence"
By Jelle Terpstra

It was a warm Tuesday night. There was a wonderful party going in the gardens of the Meester mansion. I decided to try and get my self drunk.

Mission failed, the end.

So here's my weekly question...
Regarding alcohol, what's your favorite drink?
I know what's mine, PassoaCola or KiwiCola, both really good.

Now goodbye my dear readers.

~Jeot

AND FUCK YOU NORWAY

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PS Brushes: ~wyckedBrush ~Darkresources =Shad0w-GFX

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Mood: Excited
Listening to: Another Stranger Me - Blind Guardian

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Jelle Terpstra
Artist | Hobbyist | Other

Netherlands

I'm Jelle T.
I'm 18 years old.
Most of my interests are in drawing and writing. Mostly poems, you may find some lyrics here too. I play lead guitar in a band called Vox. We're kinda pop/rock band. Not big, or famous, we don't even have fans, but it's alright ^_^

PS:
I FUCKING HATE GRAVITY

Current Residence: The Terpstra Mansion (lawlz)
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Favourite genre of music: (Hard)Rock, Metal, Classic Rock, Blues, Jazz
Favourite photographer: Jan R. Terpstra
Favourite style of art: Music
Operating System: Windows XP Professional
MP3 player of choice: iPod
Shell of choice: A Seashell :gooby:
Wallpaper of choice: Anything Doomish
Skin of choice: Something Dark
Favourite cartoon character: Stewie Griffin
Personal Quote: Que?

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rays of reflection

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~Jeot21 Jul 18, 2010 Hobbyist Artist

Yups :3
Most probably : D

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I hate you SO much, I would have an orgasm while stabbing you to death.

~Lorijn-Lammes Jul 16, 2010

Dan ben je een stalker van Linde!

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Stop taking breaths and start breathing, honey.

~Jeot21 Jul 12, 2010 Hobbyist Artist

GASP OH NO I AM NOT
Ik zag je via Linde's profiel

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I hate you SO much, I would have an orgasm while stabbing you to death.

~Lorijn-Lammes Jul 7, 2010

OMG STALKER! @_@

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Stop taking breaths and start breathing, honey.

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Love is a quick death... or a sandwich... i love's me a sandwich.

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